After handing in our draft and getting feed back we wanted to change our poster, although overlapping the two photos would mean we could use to photos to show what the film is about, we felt because they were overlapped the poster was clear and lookd a bit of a muddle, so we opted to keep the ballet shoes as the whole film is based around ballet and remove emma from the poster. This meant that we had to dull the white title and we improved the tag line as we were told 'to rise' didnt give enough detail into the film.

 

We added information about how the producer of this film has produced other films because that is an often occurance in posters, and also adding a review. Our teacher told us we should add a rewiew that would draw people to want to watch, we actually found it hard to think of something, positive and short to say, eventually we came up with 'outstanding performance' as we felt this would draw the viewers in to want to see the 'performance'.

 

We chose to leave the quote in white because it is so close to the feet and we felt it stood out well. I also changed the information at the bottom of the page to white because that was the only colour that stood out properly on the wooden floor.